Shelly Fagan
2 min readJun 2, 2019

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Well, I spent several hours engaging with you and analyzing your Medium stories. I rewrote your article free of charge, something I usually get paid to do. Yet you dismiss this and insult me by acting like this is a stupid idea.

I doubt you bothered to read it. I do know you didn’t thank me.

Frankly, I am not sure I can help further or what you think I should do.

I edited your article to show how I thought you could improve your engagement. Free of charge. I believe with the new edit and adding tags for politics, it will get curated. I am not sure why you wont try it -- if you truly want an answer.

Or you think the edit is shit, but then why are you responding to me?

I have had no problems getting my stuff in publications or featured using this approach. But hey, my advice is shit because you said so.

I explained what I thought was the problem. I may not be correct, but I gave it my best shot. I also gave you a free and painless way to test it. Hell, you could have tried it just to be polite. I was willing to tweet it to 4k followers and ask them to compare the two articles.

You have rejected it because it isn’t the answer you wanted. I don’t know if you want me to throw out ideas until I give you one you want?

Let me put it another way. You’re like the guy who is one step above homeless who thinks he is such a catch he doesn’t have to bathe or dress decent, then complains women won’t date him. When someone tells him the problem, he wants to complain about reality.

Your writing is not good enough to draw any sort of amazing attention on its own. Neither is mine. My biggest Medium piece has only 10k views.

I have read only one writer on Medium who was talented enough to gain massive followers by the quality of his writing. One.

So your only other choice is to churn out Pulitzer prize winning work.

I have got nothing else for you.

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Shelly Fagan
Shelly Fagan

Written by Shelly Fagan

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